Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Dawn~



To the east,
Where darkness rules,
A weak, dim light
Dapples the hills in golden, swirling pools.

The blackened sky
 Is touched by wonder,
And the veiled horizon
Reveals its color.

First a soft shade of yellow,
Then a touch of gold;
Followed by a cherry pink,
Heaven's glories do unfold.

The sparrows awake,
Giving thanks to the morning.
They lift up their voices
In a song free of mourning.

The new day is blessed.
The mouse, rabbit, and fawn
Awake in the meadow,
And all watch in awe the lovely, coming dawn.

© Hannah Scarlett 2011


6 comments:

  1. teh dawn....

    AWESOMENESS!!

    Frosty

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  2. wait.. this is calm....

    but its still.....

    Awesomeness!!

    Frosty

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  3. Hannah, this is absolutely beautiful! I saw the sunrise as you described it! Isn't that what poetry is all about - you express for me something that I cannot find the words for myself! Patty W.

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  4. This is a nice take on "the dawn's early light."

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  5. Beautiful! You used lovely descriptive metaphors so it was easy to picture what you were talking about.

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